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Safe Society transcript Episode 10

               SAFE SOCIETY
               episode 10
               by CHRIS SHIMOJIMA
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                                        INTRO TITLE SOUNDS: ("Safe Society"
                                        chorus of whispers)

                                   NARRATOR
                         Sofia's done it.  We always knew
                         this birthing person would have
                         uncanny instincts to sniff out
                         crime.

                                        RECAP SOUND BITES.

                                   SOFIA
                         THEY'RE MINE MY WOMB YOU PIG I
                         ALWAYS KNEW EVERY RACIST WHITE BONE
                         IN YOU WOULD SNAP LIKE THE COWARD
                         YOU ARE AND YOUR FATHER WAS.

                                   NARRATOR
                         She -- and not old white perverted
                         men -- has taken the reins where
                         we've been disabled, alerting Safe
                         Society.

                                   SOFIA
                         MY BABYYYYYY

                                        Tire squeals.  Car roars away......

                                        Sofia is panting.  Growling......

                                        TKTKTKTKTKTKTKTKTKTKTKTKTK!

                                   SOFIA (CONT'D)
                             (verbalizing as she texts)
                         Safe Society.  Come in.  Safe
                         Society.  Hahahaha...

                                        She cackles, witch-like.... It
                                        trails out.....

                                        MUSIC: tense, piercing, march of
                                        doom

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Word is getting around.  Safe
                         Society partners are posting
                         alerts.



               ALL OVER

                                        AUDIO MONTAGE of phone vibrations
                                        and alert sound fx, FILLING OUR
                                        EARS.

                                   AI DEVICE VOICES
                         Breaking News, Breaking News
                         Emergency Alert, Emergency Alert
                         Terrorists, terrorists,
                         terrorists.....

                                        Typing sounds, FILLING OUR EARS

                                        TKTKTKTKTKTKTKTKTKTKTKTKTKTKTKTK

                                        Large clock hand snapping.

                                        Dong!  Dong!  Dong!



               INT. M'S CAR - NIGHT (TRAVELING)

                                        Car driving sounds.  Cars swooping
                                        by outside.  Loud struggling --
                                        tapping the window -- kicking and
                                        clawing the leather seats.

                                   LUCIA
                         AHHHHH!  AHHHH!  MOMMY!

                                        Daniel is crying.

                                   M
                         LUCIA!  STOP!



               EXT. M'S HOUSE - NIGHT

                                        Cop car waiting sirens.

                                   SOFIA
                             (in tears)
                         Yes.  Yes, that's right.  Both
                         kids.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Sofia's alerting the cops.

                                   COP (ON INTERCOM)
                         California license plate 7-O-F-P-5
                         5-4



               INT. M'S HOUSE - NIGHT

                                   SOFIA
                         He took them.  He's gone crazy,
                         batshit crazy.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         She's talking directly with W.

                                   W
                         Good thing we have alert birthing
                         persons like you, instead of senile
                         white men.



               ZOOM MEETING

                                   W (ZOOM CALL)
                         Yes.  It is regretful.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         W is talking with other Members.

                                   SAFE SOCIETY MEMBERS (ZOOM CALL)
                         Regretful.  Regretful.  Regretful. 
                         Regretful.  Regretful.  Regretful.



               INT. M'S CAR - NIGHT (TRAVELING)

                                   LUCIA
                         MOMMY!!!!  Help, I don't want to
                         go!  Go back!  Get away!

                                   M
                         Mommy is not Mommy anymore!  Lucia,
                         look at your brother!  He knows I
                         am helping!

                                   LUCIA
                         Why did you do that??  Liar -- you
                         made him want to stop school -- to
                         get the virus -- you want him to be
                         white and kill innocent people --
                         you made him bad --

                                   DANIEL
                         Lucia... shh... Ah!

                                        She kicks Daniel.  Daniel starts
                                        crying again. 

                                        Car stopping.  Phone unlocking. 
                                        M's voice starts to double with the
                                        EXTRA DEEP RESONANCE.  More INTENT
                                        in his voice:

                                   M
                         Lucia!  Look here!  We cannot help
                         Mommy now!  She wants to turn you
                         into this! 

                                        Lucia yells back.

                                   M (CONT'D)
                         MOMMY WANTS TO TURN YOU INTO THIS.

                                        Sound of her spitting at him.

                                   M (CONT'D)
                             (to himself)
                         Voice isn't working.  What the
                         hell.

                                   LUCIA
                             (pure hatred)
                         You racist.  You're not my dad
                         anymore.

                                        M stifles back sobs.



               ALL OVER

                                        AUDIO MONTAGE of more phone
                                        vibrations and alert sound fx,
                                        FILLING OUR EARS.

                                   AI DEVICE VOICES
                         M - compromised.  M - compromised.
                         Missing kids.  Missing kids. 
                         Missing kids.  Missing kids.



               EXT. STREET - NIGHT

                                        Cop car drive-by sirens.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE 
                         Police have tracked the license
                         plate.  They're coming up on the
                         car.  Flashlights shining in.

                                   COP (ON INTERCOM)
                         Nope.  Car is empty.  No one's in
                         here.

                                        MUSIC: dramatic swell



               INT. B'S CAR - NIGHT (TRAVELING)

                                        Car driving sounds.  Lucia
                                        screaming still.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         B is driving them.

                                   NARRATOR
                         Did we break the cloaking
                         mechanism?  Did we alert Safe
                         Society about him?

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Yes.

                                   B
                         Yesterday was no good.  They're 
                         tracking, somehow.  Making their
                         way through all of us.



               INT. STORE - DAY

                                        Shopping sounds.  Then the 2 pairs
                                        of marching footsteps, in unison.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Three Terrorists caught in
                         different locations.

                                   B
                         My group is down to 6.  Maybe 5.

                                   MEN IN SUITS
                             (simultaneous)
                         Come with us.



               EXT. STREET

                                   MEN IN SUITS
                             (simultaneous)
                         Come with us.

                                        Sudden loud footsteps, running.  A
                                        Rebel panting.



               INT. ANOTHER STORE

                                        Another Rebel (REBEL 2) roaring,
                                        guttural:

                                   REBEL 2
                         GET OFF!  GET OFF ME!

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Customers and cashiers glanced
                         over, but did not get in the way. 
                         One actually nodded at the Men in
                         Suits. 

                                   NARRATOR
                         Listeners, let's thank these
                         watchful Civilians that report the
                         Terrorists.



               EXT. M'S NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY

                                        Civilian voices FILLING OUR EARS.

                                   SOFIA
                         We have to Shatter That Glass. 
                         Now.

                                   CIVILIANS
                         Yes.  Shatter That Glass.  Ick. 
                         Ick.  Shatter That Glass.  We have
                         to Shatter That Glass.  Shatter
                         That Glass.



               INT. ROOTING4U HEADQUARTERS - DAY

                                   EMPLOYEES
                         Ick -- ick -- ick -- ick --

                                   W
                         Rooting4U Employees.  In memory of
                         the fallen M, my protege, we have
                         to Shatter That Glass.  Now.

                                   EMPLOYEES
                         Yes.  Shatter That Glass.  Shatter
                         That Glass.  Ick.  We have to
                         Shatter That Glass.  Shatter That
                         Glass.  Yeah!!!!  WOOOOO!!!

                                        Their motivational cry blends and
                                        morphs into a demonic shriek.



               EXT. M'S NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY

                                        Same here with Sofia and her
                                        Civilian group.  A demonic shriek.



               EXT. STREET - DAY

                                        Thunderous thumping in the
                                        distance.

                                        Getting closer.  

                                        Sounding more clear now: footsteps
                                        marching in unison.  HUM AND CHANT
                                        in the background.

                                   CIVILIANS
                             (chorus of voices)
                         Shatter That Glass!
                         Shatter That Glass!
                         Ick -- ick -- ick -- ick --

                                        MUSIC: intimidating drums climaxing



               INT. B'S HOME - DAY

                                        Things clanging.  Packing sounds. 
                                        Footsteps rushing.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE 
                         Counting only B and 4 others
                         remaining in this Terrorist group.

                                   M
                         Where are we going?

                                   B
                         There's a stronghold inland near
                         Tucson.  I'm gonna go out on a limb
                         and say let's not stop overnight,
                         let's get there as fast as we can. 
                         I'll let them know to expect us.

                                        Items rustling.

                                   YANN
                         Who wants this wig?

                                   REBEL 1
                         We really need that stuff?
                         No, you definitely do.
                         M... 
                         Yann.  

                                   REBEL 2
                         I don't need a disguise.  
                         What are you talking about?  I'm
                         confused.  Who is this for? 
                         M, yeah... the kids?  That's all.

                                   B
                         ANYONE WHO STEPS OUT OF THEIR CAR! 
                         AND CHECK YOUR TAIL EVERY SECOND! 
                         THIS IS OUR LIVES AT STAKE!

                                        He's energized, getting a kick out
                                        of being in the midst of such an
                                        important mission.



               EXT. B'S HOME - DAY

                                        Front door opens.  

                                        Sets of footsteps -- hurrying out.

                                        One set -- Lucia's -- scurrying
                                        faster --

                                   M
                         Lucia!  Stop!

                                        Struggling / grabbing sounds.

                                        Car doors open.  Bodies getting in.

                                   B
                         Let's go let's go let's go.

                                        Car doors close.

                                        In the distance, other
                                        footsteps.... car doors
                                        opening/closing..... engines
                                        starting.



               INT. B'S CAR (TRAVELING) - DAY

                                        Car driving sounds.  Highway cars
                                        zipping by outside.  Lucia
                                        grunting.

                                   B
                         They want to hurt us, Lucia.  And
                         stop your Dad from freeing his
                         followers.  Is that what you want? 

                                        Lucia keeps grunting -- at least
                                        she's no longer screaming.



               EXT. HIGHWAY - DAY

                                        Cars zip by.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         5 cars on the move.



               EXT. PIT STOP / PARKING LOT - DAY

                                        Distant car traffic.

                                        Car doors open.  Feet -- stepping
                                        out.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         They're all in disguises.  M and
                         the kids have wigs.



               LADIES' RESTROOM

                                        Reverberating sound of faucets
                                        running, toilets flushing.

                                        Lucia's footsteps -- coming out and
                                        stopping.

                                   M
                             (whispering)
                         Lucia!  Lucia!
                             (sighs)

                                        M's footsteps hurrying over --
                                        grabbing sounds -- then hurrying
                                        back the way he came.

                                   LUCIA
                         No!

                                   M
                         Shhh shut up!



               FOOD COURT

                                        Distant people talking and moving
                                        about.

                                        Store sounds.  Beeping.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         One of the Terrorists is paying for
                         his meal.  Looking all around,
                         anxious...... The cashier looks
                         wary.  So do nearby customers.  We
                         are checking if the Safe Society
                         alert has spread to any of them.



               EXT. PARKING LOT

                                        Distant door opening.  Footsteps --
                                        stepping out.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         The Terrorist is back on the move. 
                         Wait -- we're in luck.  Confirming
                         we have Civilian helpers in the
                         mix.  I repeat, we have Civilian
                         helpers in the mix.

                                        Another set of footsteps catches
                                        up.  WATCHFUL CUSTOMER confronts
                                        and argues with the Rebel (REBEL
                                        3), but we're distant, so it's hard
                                        to hear specifics.  Then the
                                        Customer gets louder:

                                   WATCHFUL CUSTOMER
                         Hey!  I said stop!  Help!  Get him!

                                        More bodies pushing through the
                                        door.  More footsteps -- swarming
                                        over.  Rough struggling sounds.

                                   REBEL 3
                         ARGHHH!!

                                        B, close to us:

                                   B
                         Shit.  M, let's go let's go.

                                        M and the kids' footsteps
                                        approaching -- rushing.  Car doors
                                        opening.  Closing. 



               INT. B'S CAR (TRAVELING)

                                        Car driving sounds.

                                   B
                         Shh.  Act normal.

                                        PASSING ONE OF OUR EARS: muffled
                                        sounds of customers yelling.  And
                                        the Rebel crying out.

                                   M
                         What -- what are they doing to his
                         eyes?

                                   B
                         You should know.  Once upon a time,
                         you enabled them.  

                                        B sighs, then through gritted
                                        teeth, clenching his jaw:

                                   B (CONT'D)
                         Look at that.  Fucked up, man. 
                         Fucked up.

                                        Slamming the steering wheel.



               EXT. HIGHWAY

                                        The cars zip by.  Now only 4 total. 

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Down to 4 cars.  4 cars on the
                         move.



               INT. B'S CAR (TRAVELING)

                                        Car driving sounds.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Out of disguises now.  Must think
                         they're safe.

                                        A button pushed.

                                   B
                         What happened?

                                        REBEL 4's voice on the car
                                        speakers:

                                   REBEL 4 (ON SPEAKER)
                         I got a tail.  I'll have to split.

                                        MUSIC: tense, building

                                        B sighs.

                                   B
                         Copy.  Good luck.

                                        Beat.

                                   M
                         I see him.  He turned.  

                                   YANN (ON SPEAKER)
                         The tail's not following him.  I'll
                         have to veer off too.

                                   B
                         Motherfucker!

                                        Bangs the dashboard.

                                   M
                         Yann's turning.  The tail's
                         following now.

                                        MUSIC: winding down, calming



               EXT. QUIET STREETS ON THE OUTSKIRTS OF TUCSON - NIGHT

                                        Cicadas.  Distant coyotes.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE 
                         2 cars only now.  Terrorist group
                         is thinning.

                                        The 2 cars pass -- at a measured
                                        speed -- FROM ONE EAR TO THE OTHER.



               INT. B'S CAR (TRAVELING)

                                        Car driving sounds.  Quiet outside.

                                   B
                         Our destination is there somewhere
                         in those mountains.

                                   M
                         Right turn coming up.  Continue for
                         1 and a half miles. 

                                        Car turn signal.

                                        Then suddenly, the car brakes --
                                        jolts!

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Law enforcement cars have the
                         street blocked.  Just in time.  

                                        Window rolling down.

                                   B
                         Back, Rebel 5, back back back!

                                        The other car (REBEL 5's) slams
                                        into reverse.

                                        B's car does the same.

                                        Daniel and Lucia yelp.

                                   M
                         Red light red light --

                                        Slamming on gas.  Accelerating.

                                        Then shifting the gear to forward,
                                        and screeching into a turn.

                                        Another car honking.

                                   B
                         Shit, who's that??

                                        Sofia's voice yelling, muffled,
                                        PASSING ONE OF OUR EARS.

                                   LUCIA
                         MOMMYYYYYYYY!  MOMMYYYYYY!

                                        Accelerating again.

                                        Skidding left and right.

                                   M
                         Stop -- B -- ahead!  Ah fuck!

                                        Swerving and braking.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Civilian cars have arrived.  This
                         street is secured.

                                        LAW ENFORCEMENT voice blares
                                        through a loudspeaker, muffled,
                                        coming from outside.  

                                   LAW ENFORCEMENT (ON LOUDSPEAKER)
                         Terrorists, release your hostages. 
                         We have coercion.  We will use if
                         needed to bring them to safety.

                                   B
                         Run -- I'll stall them.
                             (beat)
                         M!  C'mon!

                                   M
                         Okay, okay --

                                        An embrace and pat on the back. 
                                        Then the car door opening.

                                   B
                             (pushing him)
                         Now go!  Get the kids!



               EXT. DOWNTOWN TUCSON

                                        MUSIC: disturbing, driving beat,
                                        maybe a choir, the sound of fate
                                        knocking

                                        The kids are frightened, yelping,
                                        being pulled out of the car.  Car
                                        door closes.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         They're staying low.  Heading to a
                         side street.

                                   NARRATOR
                         Is Safe Society meeting the
                         Civilians and bringing the totem?

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Confirmed.

                                   NARRATOR
                         We'll await the channel opening.

                                        Slimy, peeling, dripping, rumbling
                                        sounds.

                                        Footsteps -- M and the kids
                                        running.

                                        One set stops.  Scuffling ensues.

                                   M
                         Lucia!

                                        M strains.  Lucia screams.  

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         He has his daughter on his
                         shoulder.  No way he can keep this
                         up.

                                        Footsteps -- running again. 
                                        Echoing on building walls.  Daniel
                                        breathing heavy.  M panting.  

                                        Footsteps move ACROSS OUR EARS.

                                        Then ACROSS THE OTHER WAY.

                                        Then SEEMINGLY TOWARD US.  A
                                        dizzying maze.

                                        At the same time, the slimy,
                                        peeling, dripping, rumbling sounds. 
                                        And now, cracking concrete.... and
                                        pushing through rubble.....  

                                   NARRATOR
                         Safe Society is close?  We feel the
                         totem being lifted.
                             (morphing into monster
                              voice)
                         We feel the channel opening.

                                        HUM AND CHANT.  Shaped into an evil
                                        laugh -- "hum hum hum hum ha ha ha
                                        ha"

                                        M is out of breath.  His footsteps 
                                        - staggering.  He collapses.

                                        Lucia's footsteps -- starting to
                                        run off.

                                   DANIEL
                         Lucia!  No!

                                        Daniel's footsteps -- chasing
                                        after.  He's tugging her.  They
                                        struggle.

                                        A CORNER RESTAURANT EMPLOYEE opens
                                        a distant door.

                                   CORNER RESTAURANT EMPLOYEE
                         Are you okay?

                                        His footsteps -- approaching.

                                   M
                         Yeah -- yeah --

                                        But Corner Restaurant Employee's
                                        voice immediately starts to
                                        transform --

                                   CORNER RESTAURANT EMPLOYEE
                         Wait wuhhhh wuhhhhh
                         waaaaaaaahahhhhh

                                        -- into a godawful demonic shriek.

                                        It stops for a moment, and we hear
                                        it reverberate.

                                        Soon, it gets a response: a whole
                                        set of distant shrieks.

                                   M
                             (straining, picking her
                              up)
                         Lucia!  Stop, I'm not leaving you!

                                   LUCIA
                         Let go of me!

                                        M, breathing hard through grunts.

                                        Running again.  Lucia's yelling
                                        voice bobbles as she's jostled
                                        about.



               ELSEWHERE

                                        An army of civilian footsteps,
                                        marching.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE 
                         Civilians are doing their part. 
                         Flashlights are aiming at every
                         corner.

                                   NARRATOR
                             (orgasmic)
                         Yes -- they have the totem --
                         they're lifting it -- putting it up
                         -- YES -- YES -- OH -- YES -- THE
                         CHANNEL -- IS OPENING!



               BACK TO M

                                        Footsteps -- M and the kids racing
                                        down one street, then slowing to
                                        round a corner --

                                        MUSIC: horrifying sting

                                        M and the kids scream.

                                   CIVILIANS
                         M, Shatter That Glass, Shatter That
                         Glass!

                                        More running.  Their footsteps
                                        CIRCLE OUR EARS.

                                        Large wheels rolling up, suddenly
                                        close. 

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Humvee and wave beam have been
                         activated.

                                        Their footsteps pivot to avoid.  M
                                        is yelling.  Running away.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE (CONT'D)
                         Concrete is sizzling in its path. 
                         Windows are shattering.

                                        Shattering glass.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE (CONT'D)
                         If justice is the name, then it's
                         good destruction.

                                        Their footsteps pivot again.  More
                                        Civilian voices:

                                   CIVILIANS
                         M, Shatter That Glass, Shatter That
                         Glass, Shatter That Glass!

                                        Footsteps -- M and the kids running
                                        -- CIRCLING OUR EARS.  The Civilian
                                        voices CHASING AFTER, MULTIPLYING,
                                        CLOSING IN.

                                        Scuffling.  M kicks a few times.

                                   CIVILIANS (CONT'D)
                         Oof!

                                        Kicks dirt.

                                   CIVILIANS (CONT'D)
                         Agck!

                                        Footsteps -- M and the kids
                                        running.  Civilians in the
                                        distance.

                                   CIVILIANS (CONT'D)
                         Shatter That Glass.  Shatter That
                         Glass.

                                        Footsteps stop -- M now bangs on a
                                        door.

                                        Steps to another -- bangs on it.

                                        Steps to another -- slamming open a
                                        wood door. 



               ABANDONED BUILDING

                                        Door closing.  Their footsteps --
                                        moving across dusty concrete and
                                        broken wood.

                                        M taps a wall.  All over.

                                   M
                         No -- no -- no -- ugh.

                                        The kids' voices tremble.

                                   M (CONT'D)
                         Shhh.  Get behind me.  Lucia! 
                         Please!

                                        Lucia struggles, growls.  

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Flashlights passing outside. 
                         Whipping past the windows.

                                        M and the kids yelp.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE (CONT'D)
                         2 Civilians have them cornered.

                                   CIVILIANS
                         Ick -- ick -- ick -- ick -- ick

                                   M
                         Follow me -- kids -- ugh!

                                        He sighs, stops -- it's no use.

                                        CIVILIAN 1's ticks are bigger than
                                        normal, more spasmodic, making him
                                        unpredictable.

                                   CIVILIAN 1
                         Ick -- ick ick ick -- ICK!

                                        Something unzipped.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Syringe kit unlocked.  Upgraded
                         variety.  Green fluid.  "Terrorist"
                         label.

                                        Civilian 1 grabs the kids.  The
                                        kids yelp.

                                   CIVILIAN 1
                             (shaking)
                         Hold... ick... still... ICK!

                                   DANIEL
                         Ah!!!

                                   M
                         No!

                                        Loud shoving, scuffles...

                                        CIVILIAN 2 lets out a shriek.  He
                                        turns, and it PANS across our ears
                                        and reverberates outside.

                                        Distant shrieks reply.

                                        But Civilian 2's shriek is cut
                                        short -- with a whimper like a
                                        wounded dog --

                                        -- followed by hitting the ground.

                                        Sudden yells and footsteps --
                                        running, approaching -- B and Rebel
                                        5.  

                                        Aggressive wrestling sounds.

                                   B
                         Get the syringe!

                                        Slamming something -- once -- twice
                                        -- three times -- bones crack!

                                        Civilian 1 yelps. 

                                        Then a clatter!

                                   M
                         Ah!

                                   YANN
                         Hey!

                                   M
                         Oh, it's you guys, thank God.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Remaining Terrorist group has
                         showed up.  I repeat, remaining
                         Terrorist group has showed up. 
                         There are 4.

                                        The Rebel footsteps -- walking up
                                        and stopping.

                                        Civilian 1 is breathing hard, worn
                                        out.

                                        WHOOOOOP! -- a kick

                                   CIVILIAN 1
                         Bleh!

                                        More kicks from all the Rebels.

                                   CIVILIAN 1 (CONT'D)
                         Bleh!  Ah!  Ugh!  Ack!
                             (throaty, out of breath)
                         Stop -- stop -- stop --

                                        The kids are screaming.

                                   M
                         Don't watch.  Look away.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE 
                         B has a cloth from the syringe kit. 
                         Wrapped around his fist.  He's
                         brutally punching the Civilian.   

                                        Thwack!  Thwack!  Thwack!

                                   INTERCOM VOICE (CONT'D)
                         The other Civilian is in worse
                         shape.

                                        More distant punching sounds and
                                        yelps. 

                                        Bones smashing.  The yelps become
                                        throaty, mutated -- near death...

                                        Rubble being moved.  A slab being
                                        picked up.

                                        Then a loud smash!  Skull cracking! 
                                        Liquid stuff splashing.

                                   M
                         B -- what did you -- ??

                                        Everyone quiets.  B is breathing
                                        heavily.  

                                   B
                         I dunno how else we stand a chance.

                                   YANN
                         Oh my God... look at my hands....
                         all in blood...

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         They're in shock.  This is their
                         wake-up call.

                                        Yann starts to sob........

                                        .... and walks across the space,
                                        into the distance.... Everything's
                                        quieted so much we can hear his
                                        footsteps echo..... 

                                        He cracks open the door.....

                                        Then he whistles outside.

                                   YANN
                             (outside door)
                         HEY!

                                        Soon, we hear running footsteps
                                        outside, getting closer.  And
                                        corresponding shrieks getting
                                        closer.......

                                   B
                             (whispering)
                         3...2...1... Now!

                                        Sudden sprinting.  Lunging. 
                                        Grunts.  Scuffles.  The shrieks
                                        become yelps and whimpers.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Handgun present.  Handgun present.

                                        BAM BAM BAM BAM

                                   INTERCOM VOICE (CONT'D)
                         Another civilian down.  I repeat,
                         another civilian down.

                                        Yann whistles out the door again.

                                        More running footsteps and
                                        corresponding shrieks, getting
                                        closer.

                                        BAM BAM BAM BAM

                                   INTERCOM VOICE (CONT'D)
                         2 more civilians down.

                                        BAM BAM

                                   INTERCOM VOICE (CONT'D)
                         Another civilian down.

                                        The gun clicks -- empty.  It's
                                        chucked aside.

                                   B
                         Hand combat!

                                        More scuffling.  Kicking. 
                                        Punching.  Tearing.  Yelling. 
                                        Grunting.  Vicious.  

                                        Bones snap.  More yelps/whimpers.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Civilian down.

                                        Someone being strangled.  Flailing. 
                                        Then becoming still.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE (CONT'D)
                         Civilian down.

                                        A SCARED CIVILIAN's shriek suddenly
                                        calms down and morphs into a more
                                        human voice:

                                   SCARED CIVILIAN
                         What's -- Where am I?  Please --

                                        Glass is picked up.

                                        Stabbing sounds.  Liquid and tissue
                                        splurting.  Scared Civilian
                                        screaming at the top of her lungs.

                                        The kids are screaming.

                                        More stabbing.  More bones
                                        snapping.

                                   INTERCOM VOICE
                         Civilian down.  Civilian down. 
                         Civilian down.

                                        Stabbing, splattering, screaming --
                                        echoing in slow-mo.

                                        Then, back in real-time, Lucia's
                                        footsteps suddenly start, moving
                                        into the distance, past all the
                                        commotion.

                                   M
                         Lucia!  No!

                                        MUSIC: dramatic swell